Lauren (bloodroses43) wrote in write_me_a_poem,

hey, i'm new. i love to write, but i don't know how great i am at it... i just wanted to know if anyone likes this one?

all the times it felt
so right there
in your arms,
when you whispered
me a secret no one could
ever know,
when your sweet tears
stained my shoulders
and i laced my fingers
in yours,
hoping to freeze the moment
for as long as i could hold on.

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